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05 September 2009 @ 01:34 am
 
No Peekin'
R; SHINee—Ontae; idek; nudge


note too much palahniuk does this to me ;______; for ghostdrop. stupid girl encourages these things. its going to land us all in jail.


No Peekin'




inspired by a portion of Rant by Chuck Palahniuk




   It should have been obvious. The moment Taemin had handed Jinki that roll of won, it should have been obvious. Taemin had never really adhered to society. And neither did Jinki, which is why they got along at all. Nevermind Taemin was a little creepy. It didn't bother Jinki much.

Even so, Jinki should have sniffed out the lie in Taemin's words when he'd said 'mom's cooking' as his explanation. Mrs Lee didn't cook.

It was a wonder that he never made the connection, even after learning that Taemin would be in charge of this year's Haunted House party on Halloween. He even helped Taemin set up, putting up streamers made of plastic pumpkins and black balloons with skulls on them, lining the edges of the ceiling. Sheets with eye holes cut with safety scissors as makeshift ghosts hung up on tack-fastened hooks.

During this, and every other spell of time where Taemin and Jinki were alone together, he would complain about how the adults were all full of bullshit, lying to the kids faces about Santa Claus and the Easter bunny. That they didn't have no morals, teaching the kids that lying wasn't a problem. Their hearts black as shit from being broken by one generation before. About how every kid was going to grow up gullible and plain stupid, just like their god forsaken parents.

He said if you threw any one of those kids out in the woods, they'd pull out a tooth and sleep on it, hoping to get a pay off from the Tooth Fairy to catch a cab back home.

"Then they'd get eaten by wolves," he said. Jinki never thought it was very funny, but he laughed in an offhanded sort of way, pretending it was a joke as much as he knew it wasn't.

Taemin didn't mean it as a joke, even if the adults played it off as one. A disgusting sixteen year old prank for which Jinki had been an accomplice. Taemin's explanation for it had been 'I just wanted to give the kids something real', and they didn't have anything to say to that. In a way, they all knew he was right. They were all liars.

Jinki had heard about how these Haunted Houses went. He figured they chose Taemin to man the last station because he was the closest thing you could come to the boogieman. Taemin was supposed to blind fold the children and then dip their hands in jello. Say it was brains. Give them a couple of stuffed green olives in a thickened corn starch mixture and say it was eyeballs. Real eyeballs plucked straight out of a head. Most of the kids believed him, squishing the olives till they busted open and making ew-faces under their blind folds.

When Choi Minhee came out screaming her little lungs out, no one, not even her brother Minho, gave her a second glance. Her mummy bandages came loose at the feet, her soles exposed and treading slippery onto the grass. Behind her was a trail of red. Food colouring, from the corn starch mixture. Bright, candy red.

She cried, and Jinki felt bad. He gave her head a little squeeze and asked what was wrong. Minho looked on, not quite bothered enough to get up and console his distraught sister. That was the problem with this town. Half the people here didn't give a shit.

"L-Lee Taemin. He put a real, live h-heart on my hands," she sobbed, arms stained red up to her mummy elbows. She scrubbed her eye, smearing the red all over her partially wrapped face. It was then, when the thick, vile smell of rotting offal reached Jinki's nose from under little Minhee's fingernails that he realised. He looked at the corn starch carefully for the first time and saw that most of it was so old it was almost black. Real, caked up old blood from a cow or a goat, all over Minhee's face.

He figured he should've gone with his instincts. Bought himself something nice with the money instead of listen to Taemin and buy that pound of cow guts from the butcher. He could have saved them all a lot of mess.

Jinki rushed into the tentage, pitch dark and reeking of rotting meat, the floor of it slippery with blood and ooze, squinting just enough to see Taemin plunge a kids arm elbow-deep into a bowl full of brains the colour of pulpy cardboard. Taemin had this face on, like he was bringing these kids a real childhood. No regret. None whatsoever.

Beside Jinki's feet was the big cows heart, Minhee's small hand print still impressed into the muscle.



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milktourmilktour on September 4th, 2009 05:44 pm (UTC)
ahsdfshkd dshkf need access to ghostdrop so angeri
hdu call me st00ped

first of all YAAAAAAAY IT'S SO SHORT YET SO OSM
i wanted some more ontae interaction but w/e this is like a you + palahniuk + brains amalgamation and and obv that is recipe for epic

but ih8u 4 not use onsuk it was an excellent suggestion

Taemin was supposed to blind fold the children and then dip their hands in jello. Say it was brains. Give them a couple of stuffed green olives in a thickened corn starch mixture and say it was eyeballs. Real eyeballs plucked straight out of a head. Most of the kids believed him, squishing the olives till they busted open and making ew-faces under their blind folds.
dis bit so palahniuk-y
junudge on September 4th, 2009 05:46 pm (UTC)
palahniuk-y
lol dis is funny word
milktourmilktour on September 4th, 2009 05:47 pm (UTC)
ur face is a funny word
junudge on September 4th, 2009 05:47 pm (UTC)
hdu skip mom and go str8 2 face u bish
milktourmilktour on September 4th, 2009 05:49 pm (UTC)
NO U
milktourmilktour on September 4th, 2009 05:50 pm (UTC)
i win
PERKYBIRD!: 창민 ☞ flawlessperkybird on September 4th, 2009 06:05 pm (UTC)
EWWWWW SO HORRIFYIN'
I'MMA HAVE NITEMAREZ NAO TYVM

no jk, it was pretty osm. not too creepy. actually, i thought it was kinda humorous.. in a vaguely disturbin' way ~
more organs means more human.: shinee ☆ epic winphasera on September 4th, 2009 06:12 pm (UTC)
YOU'RE A FREAK WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU OH MY GOD. LOL LOL LOL.
Tallrikkanintallrik on September 4th, 2009 07:29 pm (UTC)
oh my. when I saw the rating I was like 'oh so it's gonna get smutty later on' and then I was like O___________________________________O

So I don't think I have ever read something like this as fanfiction, because, well...it's pretty rare and all (for a reason) but if this hadn't been fanfiction, I would have thrown myself at it and lovet it (I used to write these kinds of things for school XD it was like the only genre I could pull off that would never get corny)

god, I write such bad comments. bottom line, it's awesome! okay? quite...disturbing.
Tallrikkanintallrik on September 4th, 2009 07:37 pm (UTC)
oh yeah and I forgot to mention; I love how you skip back and forth in time, so that at first I don't get a shit but in the end it all comes together, slowly unwinding the story like backwards.
junudge on September 4th, 2009 08:00 pm (UTC)
lol if you liked this you'll probably like the real version of this! go pick up Rant by Chuck Palahniuk sometime. :D
Tallrikkanintallrik on September 4th, 2009 08:07 pm (UTC)
hm yeah, I read about it on wikipedia, and put frankly I think it will give me nightmares XD but I'm really intrigued by the future-dystopia theme
junudge on September 4th, 2009 08:09 pm (UTC)
lol no it won't! trust me, i'm a huge, huge pussy and i'm doing just fine. XD pictures of hannibal lecter scare me worse than that book lol
mari: jonghyunvessaharja on September 4th, 2009 07:32 pm (UTC)
WAH I loved the way you made Taemin look :Q________ ♥ i love ... weird people idk. hahahah. I loved this.

"L-Lee Taemin. He put a real, live h-heart on my hands," she sobbed, ...

... is it wrong if I admit that I was like OMG YES AHHH *flail* when I read that? LOL. (I've always loved horror films and this was close to horror fic so yea... lol. Call me a creeper then... mwghaghaghaghgahgah)

I love your writing btw 8)) it's awesome~
Oh gawd I can't write anything wise here so yeah.. I loved this!! wooooo.
Keep up the good work (why do I always write food instead of good at first? lmao hahahah) and thanks for sharing this awesome fic~~♥♥
Sarah: Other ■ in a minute (a fucking minute)heechul_oppa on September 4th, 2009 08:03 pm (UTC)
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LOL. THIS IS, LIKE, MY FAVORITE KIND OF PSYCHOTIC, CHILL-INDUCING, PSYCHO THRILLER-ESQUE TYPE OF STORY. AND YOU EXECUTED EVERYTHING PERFECTLY. LOL. HDU YOU MAKE ME FLAIL SO HARD OVER SOMETHING SO CREEPY. I MUST CAPSLOCK AT YOU A BIT MORE. OWIJDA;LSKDFJALWKE.

I have strange taste. And now, for some reason, you've got me picturing Taemin running around rampant with this as his Halloween costume or something. :'D Oh god, why is that totally not as weird as it should be?
scylladakyllascylladakylla on September 4th, 2009 08:03 pm (UTC)
Alksdfljsdlfklsf I SAW THAT COMING, I KNEW IT WOULD BE REAL. D:

TAEMIN IS A CRAZY SON OF A BITCH.



... I'm okay. >_>
jaybomb on September 4th, 2009 08:08 pm (UTC)
OH MY GOD. I should've known when I saw the picture. I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN.

Anyway I liked it 8D Also I think you're the only one who could get away with writing this LOL
&chelsea;pinkfluffies on September 4th, 2009 09:30 pm (UTC)
LOL.

mental note: r rating does NOT always equal smut.

i dont know why i even thought smut after i seeing the words: Rant by Chuck Palahniuk.


i love how fucked up taemin is in this.
assum ♥
慾: 종유; we only care about 4x3jonghyun on September 5th, 2009 04:47 am (UTC)

LOL OMG TAEMIN, you sicko XD
and baww i love palahniuk's works~ but i haven't read Rant yet, shame.
dea: onkey ; mike crocodiledhengsaeng on September 6th, 2009 11:50 am (UTC)
i finally read it lol

your writing sk33lz pulled off de cows heart. i like
clearclouds on September 7th, 2009 08:32 am (UTC)
what the - omfg this is so insanely creepy but you wrote it in such a tantalizing way, i cannot help but like it :||| i kinda hate you for that.
BunBunwhitefoxbuns on November 8th, 2009 07:41 am (UTC)
holy~~~ sh*T!

WOW..I KNOW CHUCK PALAHNIUK writings but..wow~~ GREAT JOB~~
⋆: b2st: kwang smilekifed on April 9th, 2010 02:35 am (UTC)
OH MY FUCKING GOD.

OH MY GOD.

Creepy!Taemin. HOLY SHIT. Oh MY GOD. I DON'T EVEN. I...I loved it. He's all innocent and deep down completely evil. Is it bad this makes me giggle like mad? Brings me back to better times when my old fandom didn't suck. Gosh. This is so twister. Buahahaha. The SHINee fandom needs more of this. *Beams*
⋆: ddf: i love hide and seekkifed on April 9th, 2010 02:37 am (UTC)
Twisted even. Night of the Twisters was pretty badass, though. Devon Sawa is a hot bitch.
keyerskeyers on May 28th, 2010 11:39 pm (UTC)
Holy crap...
TAEMIN! Whyyy? I have never imagine taemin to be like this.. ;__;
so scary. LOL! But I like it. >:D
Jishu: Tiffanyjishu on September 12th, 2010 02:18 pm (UTC)
creepy~ love it! <3
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Lol Taemin has rabies.

junudge on June 5th, 2012 04:17 pm (UTC)
YES
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